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Richard John Walker's avatar

Thank you for your appreciative comment Maureen.

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<Mary L. Tabor>'s avatar

I feel as if I've read this before--or maybe it was an earlier excerpt. Auden is my beloved poet for all time. And here's one of favorite quotes from the Dyer's Hand that I use in my course online here: "[. . .] What kind of guy inhabits this poem?" and he asks himself this question as well: : "Here is a verbal contraption. How does it work?” That’s the first question Auden asked himself when he read a poem. And it’s a good one. I own the full collection and the biography. More on Auden always welcome., Jeffrey.

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

Thank you, Mary. I remember your love of Auden's work. When I interviewed Richard Walker about his memoir and reviewed the book, I mentioned the line about Auden in hos slippers and Lear, so maybe you remember it from there. I think Richard captures the melancholic fascination of the scene very well.

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<Mary L. Tabor>'s avatar

Indeed -- Well-done.

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June Girvin's avatar

Auden. Such a treat. I'm wondering about 'the wedding cake left out in the rain' and wondering if it was the basis for that line in the song 'MacArthur Park'...too tenuous perhaps..

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Richard John Walker's avatar

Not at all. In an earlier draft that connection was included in my text. I cut it to keep the focus on Auden.

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Gianni Simone's avatar

I like Richard's writing style. It's simple and refined at the same time.

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Richard John Walker's avatar

Thank you Gianni. Richard

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A. Jay Adler's avatar

What a striking take -- the ending so poignant, and this vision:

"Conversing with Auden is like having a conversation with a human-sized lizard turning its head slowly round to meet your gaze."

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

I'm glad you enjoyed this, Jay. So did I!

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Maureen C. Berry's avatar

Hi Jeffrey, it’s been a minute, as we say, since I’ve read your Letters. This passage was so involving, the movements and the starkness, but Walker’s sense of admiration was also evident on the page for Auden, who I know nothing about. I, too, am approaching that age, and knowing this makes me feel more connected and makes me think—what am I offering for the greater good? I’m blessed knowing this: I am loved now that I'm on the back nine, as my golf friends and I like to say. Hello!

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

Thank you, Maureen. It's great to hear from you. And I agree with what you say about Richard's writing.

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Maureen C. Berry's avatar

Morning!

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Evelyn Fox's avatar

What an enchanting excerpt! I'm fascinated by writers and their strange, often polarising personalities. This is one for the TBR.

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Leslie Rasmussen's avatar

It's a well done moment of memoir and the undercurrent of pathos is sad. The loss of dignity in the process of aging can make someone a target for ridicule, but Walker manages to portray him honestly but still show respect.

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

Thank you, Leslie. I agree with all your comments. What struck me also is that I'm approaching the age that Auden was in this scene. Which adds to the pathos for me.

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Leslie Rasmussen's avatar

I am well past, perhaps why those themes stood out to me!

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Rona Maynard's avatar

How wonderful, Jeffrey. Auden in his slippers reciting Edward Lear, and then the shadow of that other Lear. Thank you !

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

Yes, I think Richard captures the scene very well, Rona!

And as I get older, the two Lears loom ever larger, I find.

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Jeremy Noel-Tod's avatar

It’s always melancholically interesting to read about Auden back at Oxford. There must have been something distinctive about how slowly he turned his head: John Carey (then a young don) remembers thinking he moved it as carefully as if it were made of glass.

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

It seems there was a fascination with how he moved. Thank you for adding Carey's comment, which is typically pithy.

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Victoria Olsen's avatar

Very moving to see the poet and his lines through all these layers— yours (Jeffrey), Richard’s as student, Auden’s peers, and his own aging as time passing. So many poignant details from different points of view. Thank you both.

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Michael Edward's avatar

What a fascinating excerpt. Thank you both for sharing. :)

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

Thank you, Michael!

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Lani V. Cox's avatar

Beautifully told, love the imagery, especially Auden lighting a cigarette and setting the stage for his one man performance. Bravo!

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

Yes, the first time I read Richard's description of the scene, I was immediately impressed too!

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Deirdre Lewis's avatar

wow, I loved reading this and loved the view on Auden who I don't know much about. "One fixed point in the chaos of his personal life is an obsession with punctuality. As if clock-watching were an anchor in the stormy sea of his turbulent emotions." I always think this of people who are really good at being on time.

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

Thank you, Deirdre. I think it's a great line from Richard. Until I read this, I thought that chaos was the only organising principle of Auden's life. But a chaotic life ruled by punctuality is more interesting to contemplate!

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David Gemeinhardt's avatar

Thanks for sharing this excerpt. Loved it. I have a friend who was on a Commonwealth scholarship at Christ Church then and knew Auden. I must ask him more about that.

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