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Yi Xue's avatar

I find myself recently often marvel at how ordinary sights or moments can transport me back to a distant past and a faint but familiar mood. Is that the mark time has left us with? 😊

And this beautiful writing of yours did just that to me … Thanks for sharing!

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Lani V. Cox's avatar

I remember when we were in Mainland America, on road trips, and for this child, born and raised in Hawaii, seeing these awesome giants nestled in valleys and across great stretches of land, left me in speechless wonder. In high school, I fell in love with poetry, particularly, Carl Sandburg's Chicago, and this idea that you could create a poem about something as mundane (and even ugly) as a factory. Thanks, Jeffrey, for another walk down memory lane!

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